5th essay privacy for grading

Cooper

Mr. Salsich

8th grade english

October 18, 2009



Privacy:

Privacy and It's Different Functions and Meanings



TS. Privacy is hard to thing to maintain. CM With the invention of the Internet and computers, anyone can look up anything about a person in a matter of seconds. CM Privacy is one of the staples of everyday life, but tends to have a little trouble staying that way. CS privacy needs to be respected and universally accepted, especially in To Kill a Mockingbird

TS Everyone in the world has a right to keep what they want to private. SD Atticus had every right to yell at the children for publicly displaying Arthur's life and violating his privacy.CM It's another lesson learned for Scout to respect other people's way of life. CM I think many people, as a child Scout's age and in her situation, would have done the same thing. SD Scout really should have learned her lesson when her classmate Walter poured molasses all over his meat. CM Walter's private life at home has taught him to flavor any of his meats. CM Since he grew up doing this, he didn't know how else to eat it! SD I am very surprised that Miss Maudie, young at heart, and fragile in being(Antithesis), knew so much about Arthur. CM While talking to Scout, she seemed very respectful towards the family's privacy while admitting to Scout so much of their story. CM It seems wrong to me that she appeared to respect them very much, and still tell quite a bit of their history. CS Without a doubt there are some excellent examples of what makes privacy so important in everyday life.

TS Keeping thinks private has always been a struggle for me. SD To me, it's hard to keep a secret that is nagging to jump out of your mouth, waiting to spoil someone's reputation.(Appositive closer) CM So I'm not tempted to spill the beans about something, I never like to know there's a secret in the first place. CM For this reason, it is sometimes better to walk away than to accept hearing someone's private matters. SD Everyone in the world needs some sort of privacy every now and then. CM I imagine people living in overcrowded places have trouble keeping up with their personal struggles. CM Special private times people set aside for themselves gives them a chance to settle down and separate themselves from the outside world. SD Privacy is hard to maintain when you're popular. CM When popularity is an important factor in your life, many people want to know whats happening in it. CM But when you only have a select group of people you can trust, those people can't always be trustworthy. publicity can be both a luxury that can attract power, and one that can bring suffering.

TS Privacy poses a difficult basic necessity to keep up with in any productive lifestyle. CM We live in such a society where people can access information about anyone from any computer. CM Although this form of living has many levels of convenience, when someone with the wrong intention uses it, it can create one heck of a bad experience for the person at the receiving end of the battle. CS If everyone respected other's and their own privacy, then this would be a world without the tormenting of other people's personal life.